As always, some more typos in the latest version:
Was there another, world down there
There's no need in the comma here.
It preobably wouldn't pass
I dont believe in criticizing art
This insectoid have all the features
knowledge bank ond chemical regulator
tremendous. there is usually
this Zombie type holds large amounts of bio energy
I think bioenergy should be written in one word.
fuelled, modelled, theatre - British spelling
Missing strings:
STR_ANTMAN_QUEEN_CORPSE
STR_GIANT_SPIDER_KING_COMMANDER
STR_ANTMAN_WARRIOR_CORPSE
STR_CYBER
DREDNAUGHT_PLANS - you added the string STR_CYBER
DREADNAUGHT_PLANS. This should be fixed either in the items_XCOMFILES.rul ruleset or in the extraStrings_XCOMFILES.rul file.