I've played a bit more, and run across some more things. Some of them more important than others.
Writing nitpickery:
- STR_ALIEN_BIOCHEMISTRY_UFOPEDIA: "The analysis of aliens' tissue" would be better as "The analysis of alien tissue". "the varying origins" would be better as "varying origins".
- STR_ANCIENT_ALIENS_UFOPEDIA: "We've known the aliens have been observing us for decades" would be better as "We know that the aliens have been observing us for decades".
- STR_DOSSIER_ABEBA_TEWOLDE_UFOPEDIA: Regarding, "after her orphanage caught fire and was send to Germany", the typo aside you may want to rephrase it, because it means the orphanage was sent to Germany. Also, I think "with victims carbonized" at the end there is kinda awkward.
- STR_DOSSIER_CRAZY_HASSAN_UFOPEDIA: Suggest replacing "However" with "Regardless of how". "payed" should be "paid". Suggest replacing "Steady customers" with "Repeat customers".
- STR_DOSSIER_HARLEY_STONE_UFOPEDIA: "Often implicated - but never corroborated - in brutal killings" is awkward because one cannot be corroborated in a killing. Also, suggest replacing "killings" with "killing sprees", given the remainder of the sentence.
- STR_DOSSIER_IVAN_PRYPET_UFOPEDIA: The final sentence in this article contains a style error in that it starts as an enumeration of what this person is, yet the final element of the enumeration is something he does.
- STR_DOSSIER_MONICA_GRUMMANN_UFOPEDIA: "member of Red Dawn research staff" would be better as "member of the Red Dawn research staff".
- STR_DOSSIER_PURPLE_LILLY_UFOPEDIA: Suggest changing "child trade, but" to "child trade until".
- STR_DOSSIER_SHANE_BARTON_UFOPEDIA: "that someone like this man and his family came in contact with alien ecosystem" would be better as "that people like this man and his family came in contact with the alien ecosystem".
- STR_FN_P90_UFOPEDIA: "50 rounds box magazine" would be better as "50 round box magazine".
- STR_MESSAGE_FROM_MAGMA_01_UFOPEDIA: "to better the humanity" should be just "to better humanity".
- STR_MUTANT_METABOLISM_UFOPEDIA: "I will be happy to provide the necessary plans whenever they're complete" is a somewhat odd sentence, maybe replace "whenever" with "as soon as"?
- STR_STAFF_011_UFOPEDIA: "wonder why is that" should be "wonder why that is". "brainwashed and blackmailed enough" would be better as "brainwashed and blackmailed to the point".
- STR_STAFF_023_UFOPEDIA: Some questionable writing in the first half of this article.
- STR_WHAT_DO_NOW_MILESTONE_2_UFOPEDIA: "wont" should be "won't". Also, "before we're decommissioned" would be better as "until we're decommissioned".
- STR_XENONAUTS_UFOPEDIA: Suggest changing "as well as" to "nor should".
- STR_ZOMBIE_BOOMER_UFOPEDIA: "loses any control over host's physiology" should be "loses any control over the host's physiology".
- STR_ZSRR_RATIONALE_UFOPEDIA: Suggest rephrasing "survive the inevitable alien rule" as "survive the inevitable alien conquest".
The rest:
- These weapons have Ufopedia texts that are too long to fit on the screen: BlackOps Auto Sniper Rifle, PSG-1, VSS Vintorez
- The BlackOps Sniper Rifle article does not mention you need Contact: BlackOps Industries to purchase it, though presumably that is a requirement.
- The BlackOps LMG claims to require Promotion III, but this is incorrect. It does require Machine Guns License though, which it does not mention; meanwhile the BlackOps Assault LMG does not require this despite being very similar.
- Consider sorting the BlackOps CAWS next to the other BlackOps shotguns.
- The Boomer Zombie combat analysis appears to be broken. It shows up in the Ufopedia as STR_ZOMBIE_BOOMER_ARMOR and crashes the game if clicked upon.
- The Shambler does not seem to have a combat analysis entry at all.
- The Dragonfly lacks a light source on its front starboard side during battles, breaking its symmetry.
- The white rocks on the tundra terrain map are all passable.