Line 2798: STR_NEWSPAPER_001_UFOPEDIA: "There is an ancient saying: beware the Greeks when they're bearing gifts. No Greeks have been observed, but, in fact, there's a strange new cult on the planet, ones that are called 'Giftmasters'. They are extremely secretive, and they randomly present citizens with gifts of very high technology, never to be seen again. These 'Giftmasters' are considered highly dangerous and are being pursuited by elite detectives of the Guild, as well as the Church of Sirius, but will they be able to answer the most nagging questions - who are these 'masters' and of what? And are their gifts really gifts or something else, much more ominous? The world has to know. For now, all citizens are to refuse any technologically advanced gift from a stranger and to immediately report such incidents to the authorities."
Should be:
"… and are being pursued…." (sp)
"… and must immediately.." (sounds better)
Line 2511: STR_PSI_ILLUSION_UFOPEDIA: "The Academy mages - and the Star Gods themselves - wield magical force that manipulates information. It can be used to play tricks, alter minds, become invisible etc. - let your imagination run wild! To actually master their most fabled power, the power to control one's mind, we need to better know our physiology, and interrogate an Academy Provost."
Should be:
"invisible, etc., " (punctuation)
Line 2631: STR_RUSSIAN_FILES_UFOPEDIA: "Pursuing the directions given by a Trader leader we've embarked upon an adventure in Russia. In an underground bunker built centuries ago, audio logs revealed a forgotten story. It seems that when the Earth was invaded by the Stellar Empire, most of the planet surrendered after a few years of struggle, but one country - Russia - fought on for a couple of decades (curiously, nowadays the area is a cornerstone of the Mutant Alliance) and became the last refuge of the so-called X-COM project, a clandestine organisation created back then to pit the best and the brightest against the outworldly invasion. We've found some technical expertise developed by X-COM, chiefly that of nuclear-powered laser weapons that had practically unlimited energy supply. However, to make heads and tails of these data we need to expand our knowledge base in the areas of nuclear weaponry and power sources. We must also examine contemporary Laser and Gauss weapons before attempting to develop laser guns based on X-COM expertise."
Should be:
"this data, " (word usage)
Also, I would change "outworldy invasion" to "extra-terrestrial invasion" (awkward word usage)
Further suggestion: "…to pit Earth's best and brightest…" (word usage)
Line 2888: STR_PINUP_107_UFOPEDIA: "Our mutant bodies are able to quickly regenerate any form of non-lethal injury, so we can be smooth and ready for more adventure again, but it won't happen overnight. The healing might take anywhere from 0.5 to 1.5 times as many days as the amount of HPs an injured warrior was missing. So be a good sis and don't forget to heal as much as you can before ending a mission, since an early help can greatly reduce the duration of the painful recovery process."
Should be:
"early treatment" (word usage)
Line 2451: STR_BIKINI_UFOPEDIA: "You need a great body not to be scared to take this outfit to the battlefield (effective Wt = 17), but its skimpy nature might prove distracting to the enemies. Melee Dodge %: REACTIONS*0.6. VooDoo Pwr Defence + BRAVERY*0.1. Energy Recovery +40%."
Should be:
"..body to be brave enough to take …." (better wording)
