Hey. I've made a list of small issues I've come across so far (all still in the early game so far).
First, the grammar nazi section.
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Angel of Death: typo "ciivilians"
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Crate of Violence: typo "wider area that you'd think"
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Red Codex: "unlock ship's armory", should be "the ship's armory"
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Green Codex: "unlock Hull's medical facility", should be "the Hull"
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Red Revolution: "the evil" should be simply "evil"
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Contact: Smugglers: "the space" should be simply "space"
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Electro-flare: typo "nigh-gem"
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Recruit: Warriors: typo "Standarized"
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Contacts: Ship Junkyard: typo "crafts"
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Hidden Expanse: "worship Deep Ones' gods" should be "the Deep Ones' gods"
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#007: "make a break" should me "take a break"
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#056: typo "TU's"
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#058: pretty mangled overall. Suggest phrasing: "There is nothing shameful about the human body, yet there's a time and a place for everything."
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Bikini (Sea): "offers least" should be "offers the least"
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Eurosyndicate: "neither of which" should be "none of which", alternatively "none of whom".
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California Republic: typo "Allmighty"
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Forgery: "need to figure out yet" should be "have yet to figure out", alternatively "haven't figured out yet".
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Plastasteel Munitions: "Replacing the bullet mantle" should be ""By replacing the bullet mantle".
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Spartan Lieutenant: "without questions" should be "without question"
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Phobos Hits the Charts: There's a full stop at the end that shouldn't be there.
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Chem Grenade: This says "Demolitions: 100%", should that be +100%, as with the pickaxe?
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Ghostgates: "death-like state" should be "a death-like state", "a notion" should be "the notion" and "less so" should be "let alone". Moreover fully the second half of this article is one long, rambling sentence that meanders from one subject to another. and has little coherence. Suggest the following rewrite:
STR_GHOSTGATES_UFOPEDIA: "Rumours say the country is haunted, and if you take a wrong turn, you could find a vampire or worse. Legend has it, just after conquering the Earth, the Star Gods had to curb excess population levels of that time, so they resettled billions of people from the whole Euroasia onto the isolated subcontinent, only to destroy them with a host of nasty plagues, some killing outright, some causing slow agony, some putting people in a death-like state or doing even more bizarre things. While the notion that there could ever be a billion people living on the planet (let alone multiple billions) seems a bit of a stretch, Ghostgates is lush enough to make it plausible. However it also is definitely spooky, with its endless old boneyards and ruins, and its silent, big-eyed inhabitants, living in dozens of disparate counties and towns. Not to mention that the five aristocratic families of old, who have the right to elect the local Patriarch, could well be the vampires of legend judging by their looks and decadence."
Some other assorted things.
- The White Shambler disassembly numbers are wrong. They show 5/12/4 for the live specimen and 3/9/6 for the corpse. The final number is swapped between the two.
- Some grenades, including Willie Pete, Stun Grenade and Frag Grenade appear in the upper corner of a tile instead of the center.
- I think armors with "standard" inventory space, such as the Warrior Armor, should still show 25/25 in the description to avoid confusion. Personal preference.
- There is no "Skill" description for the Hammer, Chainsaw, and grenades-as-weapons items. These use ranged fire modes, but are not based on Firing Accuracy so I think the paedia should mention that.
- Integrated Devices counts as "Them", should probably be "Treasure".
- Ditto with Imp Corpse, Megascorpion Carcass. (Dark One Corpse and Demon Corpse are Treasure).
- Bad Touch benefits from kneeling bonuses. Seems unintentional, though I'm really not sure about that one.
- Suggest rephrasing STR_OK_5_SECONDS to "Aye - 5 secs", because it feels like an omission to leave it as default.
- [Edit] I also found an issue with the Pachyderm map. The starboard support is walkable:
(note also the misaligned Willie Pete in that image)