I have another round of fiddly nitpicks.
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Ghoul Scientist: "The 'Scientist'" should be "The 'Scientists'", "abhorring" should be "abhorrent".
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Imp Demon: "with seemingly" should be "with a seemingly".
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Possessed Sarge: "arguing to be" should be "arguing that to be", "had clearly female" should be "had a clearly female".
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Auto-Ax: "Yet another proof" is fine per se, but the next sentence treats "proof" as an uncountable noun so "Yet more proof" is a better fit.
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Light Craft Weapons: ""and better stock" should be "and you'd better stock".
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#062: "Eyes can deceive you" should be "Your eyes can deceive you".
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Church Warmaiden: "called Maidens" should be "called the Maidens", "of Church's" should be "of the Church's", "Maiden's training" should be "The Maiden's training", "Maids" should be "Maidens", "of all Church's" should be "of all Church" (given space constraints).
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Gnome Tome #*: All commas between "type of gnome" and "who" should be removed.
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Gnome Tome #6: "she choose" should be "she chose".
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Test Flight: "crafts" should be "craft".
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Ancient Log AC06-B5: Felt the need to edit this a little for readability:
STR_HISTORY_010_UFOPEDIA: "After Earth was flooded with alien artifacts, given to governments by the Star Gods or left after the Majestic 12 were dissolved, a vibrant black market for these goods soon emerged. This was initially a vast, global network of ruthless individuals who knew where to get the alien stuff and how to sell it well. This network was an arena of struggle between several criminal cartels, and the last one standing was known as Osiron. Thus, Osiron became the biggest player on the alien artifact market, both clandestine and legitimate. Then at some point they were approached by the Star Gods themselves, who offered them a deal: Osiron would stop trading psi tech, and the Star Gods would express gratitude with a steady supply of their devices. Moreover, Osiron would hold the exclusive right to develop psionic abilities, as well as manage wild psions by training or eliminating them. Osiron agreed and the Psi Academy was opened.{NEWLINE}Over time Osiron invested more and more in the Psi Academy, which eventually gained so much power that it gradually overgrew Osiron. The Academy by this point was ruled by an order of female Espers who spoke for themselves, while Osiron survived as their subordinate order."
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Catgirl: "Smuggler's" should be "Smugglers'", "scratching-proof" works better as "scratch-proof".
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Swimsuit (Sea): "out all" should be "of all"
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The Solar Governor: "get hold on all the passes" should be "get hold of all of the passes".
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Basic Engineering: "knowledge how" should be "knowledge on how".
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Dark Ones Summary: Suggest rephrasing of "I've ordered butchering of its fresh corpse" as "I had its fresh corpse butchered".
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Marsec Operative: "Trade Guild's military department, the" should be "The Trade Guild's military department,".
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Humongous Raider: "the Raider parties" works better as simply "Raider parties". Also, the last comma is best removed.
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Master's Cane: As "60% = Mastery*0.012" makes no sense, I suspect that should be a +.
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Better Tranquilizers: "given our knowledge" should be "given us knowledge".
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Marsec: "Under Star Gods'" should be "Under the Star Gods'", "an authority" should be "the authority", "protect Guild's" should be "protect the Guild's"
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Zero-G Missions: "the orbit" should be simply "orbit". Suggest rephrasing "there's the least interference with our Cloaking Devices" as "that's where our Cloaking Devices suffer the least interference". Also, this article is too long, the last sentence is not readable.
The following strings are fairly visible when inspecting items with middle-click, but have no translation. Suggest:
STR_DIRECT_DEPENDENCIES: "Dependencies"
STR_LEVEL_2_DEPENDENCIES: "Secondary Dependencies"
STR_LEVEL_3_DEPENDENCIES: "Tertiary Dependencies"
STR_LEVEL_4_DEPENDENCIES: "Quaternary Dependencies"
STR_END_OF_SEARCH: ""
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Sniper Armor: It seems inconsistent to refer to negative "encumb" here while everywhere else this concept is treated as positive "carrying capacity". Suggest changing it to "+7 Carrying Capacity".
- Sniper Rifle PS clip manufacturing title is incorrect; it claims 12x5 but each clip only holds 10 rounds.
- It seems odd that the WP mortar shell has a blast radius of only 2 tiles while the WP grenade has a radius of 3.
- There's an issue with the stairway leading to the roof on the mall map tile; the roof extends over the upper-most tile of the stairway.
